These Two Hearts - Chapter 34
Recap: Heath was lying on his back in bed. He rolled his head to the side when Charlee entered the room. She dropped her dressing gown to the floor and crawled in beside him. She cuddled against him,...
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That was beautiful. Sad and beautiful beyond words. The imagery of the Thunderbird/grandfather/condor and Jarrod holding her tightly but letting her go as he kept his gaze on the ascending bird was...
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sigh--so sad--so beautifulWhile JARROD and BETH struggled to face death, HEATH and CHARLEE struggled to face life. and you did an incredible job of describing both--I was crying at the end--Heath's...
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Beautiful, Kay!! So heartbreaking, but so well-written!!!!
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So well written, so sad. I cried for them all. I just hope Jarrod will grieve and then move on with life. And I hope Heath will realise how much he still has to give.
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Wonderfully written chapter Kay !!!Hurry back !!!Laura
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I am still about six chapters behind on this great story, but at times I take a sneak peek. What a very touching scene you had with Jarrod and Beth. I sure hope Jarrod is able to move on and not...
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Another well written chapter in this great story. Beth's passing was tastefully done. It wasn't prolonged, just simply, sadly, but beautifully written. Very poignant and thought provoking.
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Whoa....that was a heck of a lot to take in. Beth's illness and eventual death...Heath's slow recovery and now despondency over his seemingly permanent paralysis. I hope those two do more talking...
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You moved me to tears with Beth's death scene. It became something magical because of the Condor. It was amazing and so beautifully written.
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The Barkley's are faced with such tragedies - Heath who has given up on his recovery and Jarrod's facing Beth's passing. And while we all knew it was coming, the delivery was beautifully sad. They are...
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